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How to write characters’ thoughts + story updates

Good evening! Time for some more story updates, plus some (hopefully) useful advice on how to write internal dialogue in fiction. Without further ado... The Million Eyes Trilogy Work is continuing on the first novel in The Million Eyes Trilogy. I’m basically two thirds of the way through reading the book to my writers’ group,… Continue reading How to write characters’ thoughts + story updates

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How to avoid head-hopping in 3rd person POV + story updates

Hello! This month I’ve got some story updates that are a little bit more exciting than last month’s, plus advice for fiction writers on tackling point of view when writing in the third-person narrative... Without further ado... Who is Rudolph Fentz? wins 3rd prize in the winter issue of Scribble This is my second most… Continue reading How to avoid head-hopping in 3rd person POV + story updates